I think I like them though - they're strong (if I do say so myself, lol.)
Whether they're good is another question; decide for yourself:
11th August
The droplets tapped out
the song
I asked you
what
was wrong
You sat for a while
Then replied
with a smile
'Danger
lingers
in her
eyes'
21st August
Voices
were won
Through blood
sweat
heartbreak
hardship.
We will not
give up
our voices
now.
So back off.
25th August
My heart is spilled
Across your health
wealth
& happiness
Use my bones for your bridges
My blood for your paint
My flame is your warmth
And that's it! Lemme know whatcha think my dearest nerdlets!!!
Previous micropoetry posts:
These are GREAT, Cee! Love the little change up <3
ReplyDeleteThank you! XD *blushes*
Deleteoh wow this nerdlet doesn't know how to express how much I like your poetry! So beautiful and powerful and in the case of Voices so relevant [sorry I took upon myself to title the 21st poem! lol]
ReplyDelete*hugs* You've just made me so happy!!! XD <3 <3 <3
DeleteI really like the first one! I enjoy reading your micropoetry, I wish I was more poetic x
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :)
Delete(And everyone is poetic! *evil poetry plans intensify* Lol.)